"The thing is, Simon. Jemnia, you remember her, the short girl with the red hair and the... you know," The interrogator waved his hands around, but the visual double entente went over Nazvidson's head, "she went away crying when you wouldn't talk to her. But, what if he didn't? He was trying to get answers from Slash, who was sitting in a chair across from where he was pacing. ", "That's fine. Writing Prompts. âNo matter,â the tall man said. You're a clever one, how'd you ever get picked up by our boys? His watch had run out of battery... how many days ago? The thin man looked at the bound man. Hmm... 2/2020 NOTICE - To fight back against spam comments, I am closing comments to all older posts. The pressure of silence was starting to get to him. No, he couldn't. Writing About: An Interrogation For a mystery novel, or a story about murder, you may find you need to write about an interrogation, as I had to. That is an interesting fear and would make a great story...you're great at murder-mysteries...maybe you can turn it into one. I've heard that cops actually hate those shows because they aren't accurate or real. Spittle rained on the table as Jack leaned in to scream in his interrogator's face. Caulwell grabbed the jug and poured himself a glass with a shaky hand. ;)Those luncheons must be really interesting. I'd love to hear your thoughts on how odd Jeffrey Scott wrote when he was only 19. I would just keep subject-verb agreements in mind as you write. Never been arrested but have had quite a few tickets, lol.Congratulations on the award! âLet me be clear about this, Mr. Conrad. Just one piece piece of information, that's all he needed to give and it'd be all be done. They were a lot easier. The interrogator leaned forward slightly. Great timing with this post. Have a seat, please." Great advice! The interrogator reached out and pushed the jug of water towards Caulwell, insisting. Cookies help us deliver our Services. We wouldn't harm a hair on that head of your's here. "Suit yourself." Didn't they used to play together? But, you have a chanceright now to help yourself.You don't seize it,I take my business across the streetand I never see you again.So you tell me how this ends.And don't do it for me, no.Do it for you. The Commander didn't work for the government, but he was called Commander. Colberg set it back down with the others and smiled. Nazvison?". I chatted with an officer on the phone, and he said he'd be happy to set them straight. This was useful! All I wanted was freedom, I didn't mean to kill her... my Maria...". The air in the room had grown stale over the past few hours. Are we, Mr. I could only feel the cool droplets exploding as they hit the hard surface of my head. To be fingerprinted for an FBI background check before deploying to the G-8 with Georgia Emergency Management. I was set free by that fire. Speaking of, one of my friends called earlier from his, to let me know he bumped into your wife. I did use Google, but this list is way more helpful. Article by Shutterstock. In quite a few of my books and WIPs, police stations are substances, and the firearms section examines bullets and firearms to see if Harmed? He was definitely ready to talk. She's famous you know, in all the vid-screen and on all the posters. I know when someone's smart, like you, and when we've got some punk kid stealing TVs to sell for booze money. Correct? Involuntarily he jerked back and tried to shake it out, but it wouldn't work. A cop source really is the best thing you can have to make sure you're doing it right.You're very welcome! You're right, this post is more for what a big city station would be like. She's introducing us to one of her heroines of steel...Gwen Slade, who is a bounty hunter. Why are you here?!" Mar 19, 2013 - This Pin was discovered by Rob Barnes. :). Thanks, Quanie! Jack remembered what it was like to speak to another human. I doubt she'd be with a man who smuggles coke through the Cargo Docks and bangs nasty hookers. Oh, God, they're holding us here with guns and I don't...I don't know what to do. The tall man paused and glanced at the bound man. Jack jumped at the man, screamed and banged his hands against the table - no reaction. Interesting post, this kind of research sure never hurts and is perfect when writing as a detective. That's what I was more ashamed of. I love these interrogation scenes--the drama and suspicion. Stephan was so thirsty, it had been days since he had anything to drink. The interrogator sat back, folding his hands behind his head. I don't give a fuck if you go to jail or not. *Some stations in smaller areas may not have all of this and may need to rely on bigger stations elsewhere for aid. A long-range surveillance photo of Katherine walking the kids down to the bus stop. And you want to know a secret?". The door opened from the outside and the same two men came in again. :D, Love the post, Chrys. âMr. "You've been labeled as a threat by your country's government, and we're here together to find out if that accusation is warranted. I suppose to learn and to try to dissuade you from ending up there. Foul play. We had no fucking proof of any such thing. Stephen didn't know what was happening anymore. Will, is that you? ", Martel laughed. through the soundproof glass. Caulwell took a seat, and folded his arms across his chest, staring at the Interrogator. :D, Interesting post, Chrys. officers/detectives on the other side who watch the interrogation and the your own Pins on Pinterest He felt his face reddening, and his breathing quickened. If traffic hadn't let up when it did I might've succeeded. I have been in a police station, very weird feeling because as soon as I see a police car - I feel guilty! Nazvidson snapped back to look at Colberg. So very, very slowly. The thin man stepped into the room with purpose. I love it when people say something one of their WIPs will benefit from one of my posts. I might even hurt you. The place where his arm had rested seconds ago was warm against his cheek, but the rest of the table felt chilled. He's a very bland sort of fellow, doesn't have any hobbies to speak of, never goes out on the town. I had the unique opportunity to let the heroine in my (unpublished) supernatural-thriller series go crazy. "So, my friend. I will check them out soon. Writing a murder mystery or any novel, really, is a daunting undertaking. interrogation room. Not like out there." The man was right, it was my usual sloppy MO yet I constantly got off the hook. asked Jonas. I always get my confession, no matter what. "I told you I don't want anything," Caulwell said. A little old lady who works on contract, undercover for the police. I had to give my fingerprints for a job, ever since I've lived with this fear that my prints will materialize in a place they shouldn't! He did it for revenge. "Well," the man lay his hand on the cold metal table that separated them, "it doesn't look like we've been getting much of anywhere. His seven year old daughter had been killed in a car accident. In these cases, the subject comes between the helping verb and the main French Revolution Dissertation. They picked up the chairs, the table, and the tormentor - who hung limply in the big man's arms, leaving the sniveling form of Jack on the floor, snot mixing with sweat and saliva as he broke down. "Do you know what you did!" The interrogator took a phone out of his pocket and handed it to Caulwell, and gave a thumbs up towards the reflective mirror. I've got your whole internet search history right here. He checked his watch - ten seconds. He had to hold steady. The removed Jonas's handcuffs and picked him up out of the chair.". I use a sheriff's station in one of my wips. :). Congrats on the award! I think they deserve to be punished.â. I'm using blogger...nothing else. The identification/latent print section âThey were in Beirut. It now reeked of their collective stench; mostly Subject DD4123RT's unique ordure, but there was still the prickly smell of a man who sweat often and voluntarily, someone like the Sargent. Smaller stations outside of big cities may have to rely on stations in the city for certain things. A third man strode in, tall, regal and in white. Pince asked. This interrogator was the only human contact he had since being here and this freak, this sadist wouldn't even engage. "And then next Tuesday Susan Wells will disappear from her job. ", "I was a sequence away from getting the job done. How many people would be killed? After some reflection, I decided that I would right about a more intriguing kind of artist. they were involved in specific crimes. Fairy dust. I did research back in January on the whole police/arrest procedure. "If you can explain what you were up to in there, you can save everyone here a great deal of trouble. The interrogator chuckled quietly. The interrogator smiled, and stood up, reaching out his hand for a handshake. ", "He's a bit boring, but he's got a wife, Katherine Anderson, and two beautiful children, Ellie and Ronald. If someone had to, they could always call before hand and see if it was okay to get a little tour. Horizontal. Marie was her name, wasnât it?â. I've never been in a police station os that was cool to read! The interrogator exited the room, and observed as Caulwell began to look increasingly confused, as his phone vibrated several times per minute, and the interrogator watched as Caulwells life fell apart piece by piece. You probably didn't get the email because I back dated them to 1989. Would we lose the war? âDonât think I wonât be leaving, when you have an answer just scream. He's just a man who works for a shipping company and travels to Russia frequently on business. My hubby and I were chosen for the police station. Fantastic! LOL Great post!sherry @ fundinmental. The bound man stared, expressionless. "It really is a shame that you do feel like you can trust us with any more information. I gave description in the comments of your Anne post. "You know what, I'm going to get the thing you hate the most." Five? A woman's face stared back. I. He lost count. THANK YOU, CHERDO! Good job, Chrys!Congrats to all the folks on their Creative Blogger Award! I've never been in a police station. The man leaned in close and whispered, And Iâd thought long and hard about that question, but nothing came to mind. And believe me, I am an expert in terrible things. Sgt. thriller/mystery with cops/detectives, this post will tell you about a few Congratulations on the award.I've never been in a police station, although I've been in a courthouse to pay for a speeding ticket. A car accident can be exciting, scary and devastating. "Thought you weren't gonna talk, Pince. But never got to see anything useful beyond that. "I told you, Simon. I took out a tape recorder, and hit play. He couldn't give any more information. That's a good thing, right? âI, however, have a different point of view. A records/property room is a secure storage area where This post is so helpful for me as I know I'm going to be including a police station several times in my WIP. Interrogations are meant to exploit a personâs weaknesses with dominance, control, and consequence. I was beginning to think you would leave Moscow without ever enjoying our famous hospitality. But I promise you, you won't get away with this. And trust, Mr. Conrad, is built with such difficulty; but destroyed with such ease. So this valuable info - thanks Chrys. Good for you!Thank you, Susan. Jack screamed, his voice cracked, the man wimpered and fell to his knees. Funds and all that, they may not have all those features. Winner, Association for Asian American Studies Book Award in Creative Writing: Poetry Finalist, Copper Nickel/ Milkweed Editions Jake Adam York Prize âA timely book, and a needed book, Kwon Dobbsâs second collection Interrogation Room is a tour de force of documents, images, handwritten notes, erasures, and poetry, that provides a diasporic healing through its haunting lyrical experimentalism. And I thought you did good with it. The sooner you give us the Odessa File, the sooner Iâll have you on a plane to Beirut. Do you understand me?". "Mr. Stiffening a yawn with a fist he shook his head. They were safe, he told himself again. 5. You've hit all the important parts! LOL, HAHA! I've heard about Steve's daughter. "What happens if I tell you what I know? 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